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Wednesday, October 15, 2008

one page story!

When Ashok entered the house, his wife Aarthi was fuming with anger. Ashok's evening coffee reflected Aarthi's mood - too bitter. While he was drinking coffee, she started "That couple in out next apartment are too loud, always giggling and laughing. Dont they have sense", Ashok smiled and said " They are newly wedded couple , let them enjoy. What is your problem with that Aarthi? you do your work da kannamma."

Their next apartment was occupied by a newly wedded couple Sheray and Ravzi.Both had taken off for a week at office and were spending time at home. Aarthi married to Ashok for 7 years , had a son who goes to play school. The whole day Aarthi heard Sheray's and Ravzi's giggling, laughing and teasing and inturn Aarthi was bursting at her husband and son making all their life's miserable.


The next day, during lunch , Ashok was telling about his wife's irritation towards that couple to his manager. His manager smiled and told Ashok to take 1/2 day leave and go home. Ashok then realised and took half day permission and went home.

Sheray and Ravzi heard Ashok's and Aarthi's giggles and laughters the whole evening .

The End.

19 comments:

Story Teller said...

neighbours envy, owners pride ah!

btw, son pera sollavae illai?( had a son called who goes to play ) romba suspense -ah iruku therinjuka...!

Anonymous said...

A nice reminder for many of us!!!!

rantravereflect/ jane said...

haaaaa :)

mirror mirror on teh wall, who's the fairest of us all!

well, life is a mirror reflection.//

liked teh ending :)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

GIVE them what YA GET!

Anonymous said...

enna oru ending.. enaku oru doubtu.. if a bachelor hears neghbors teasig and giggling, what shd he do? :P

Kavitha Jay said...

end la twist elam theruva n paarthain..lol..mudiyala di..:D

Anonymous said...

kathila ippadi oru twist vechurukalam..son hears parents giggling and complaints to swathi (her gf).Swathi conforts this boy and they go to do..



their home work!
what else did u expect?

Raja Krishnan said...

he he he... super story ka :)

gundumama said...

:O yennaku onnume puriyalla...
please yaarachum villaka mudiyumma :?

நாகை சிவா said...

machi,

NO COMMENTS (ana niraiya comments irruku)

ENNAMO PO !!!

Raz said...

@dt: sorry... pera solla mudiyathu :P

@anon: yeah :).

@rant/jane: i know... ppl get wht they give ;)

@scudie: ask a bachelor to know de answer.

Raz said...

@netcraze: satiyama i also thot h/w .

@rajkingme: thnks thambi

@gundumama: puriyati vidu... next story unnaku puriyum.

@siva: rasa... vendam.... valikuthu!

Mads said...

lol...cute story...
:P im also a tamilian but living in gujarat..so i can kinda understand tamil..but wud prefer keeping our conversation in english when u reply back to my comment :P :P :P
thanks for visiting my blog!!

Arun Sundar said...

Hmmm.....what kind of names are Sheray and Ravzi?

cm chap said...

Ah seems to me that..you are all out soaked in romantic thoughts..Huh

It's a good one though

The Seeker said...

Lovely yaar!!! I'm very much surpised and curious reading the story. only a few people use that form of address, Kannamma! I love that
and a happy ending
liked it

Vignesh said...

I was expecting something out of it... but found it a bit blunt:)...

still good..

Divya said...

crawled in to ur page....th'gh ur comments in Nagaisiva's blog,

Cute story:-)

Li. said...

Idhuku naan kandippa comments eludhanuma? vendamae...